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The Collective Maturity of Pin
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9th-Feb-2007 09:43 pm
The Pin Drabble Thing!
Since Valentine's Day is coming up...
Theme No.2: CHOCOLATE!
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12th-Feb-2007 04:09 am (UTC)
I have never written Pin before and it is undoubtedly terrible. Thought I should give it a shot though... x x;;;;;
"Are you gonna eat that?," Jin asks intelligently, having watched Tomohisa push together and pull apart two squares of precious, delicious chocolate for the better part of half an hour.
"No," Tomohisa replies, studious eyes still fixed on the sweet substance sitting on the table in front of him. He's thankful for the slight chill in the air today - it might melt otherwise, and that would send his train of thought careering off the very intellectual and interesting track upon which it was currently travelling.
"Can I have it?", Jin presses, shifting his chair to the left a little so that his presence can be felt. It's his opinion that he is getting neither enough attention or enough chocolate right at the moment, and he'd like to rectify that as soon as possible.
"No," is the only answer from the younger of the two, who for the sixty-second time pulls the two pieces apart again and seems to contemplate this new state of existence.
"Why not?" Jin is whining now, his head resting on Tomohisa's shoulder and puppy-dog eyes seeking to be seen - but the leader of NEWS apys absolutely no attention, and this is becoming annoying by now. "Pi, look at me!"
"Have you ever thought about the number two?," Tomohisa asks, instantly causing Jin to forget his plea for attention in the face of the quickly surfacing concern for the shorter man's sanity. He has no chance to ask what on earth is meant, however, as Tomohisa decides to explain anyway. "I've been thinking about it," he elaborates. "How two is technically two ones, and yet it's still two in and of itself."
Jin, not understanding a word of what has just been said, sees the chance to steal what he wants and wastes no time in taking it. "Kind of like us," he muses around the piece of chocolate now inhabiting the inside of his mouth; he's never been the type to talk around anything with pretty words if it can be said in one sentence. This seems to be the right idea, however, for Tomohisa smiles and the final remaining morsel of the bar of Dairy Milk he'd bought nearly two hours ago is finally gone.
"Yeah," he replies with a definite air of contentment. Jin leans on him with a smile, safe in the knowledge that he's somehow managed to diffuse a potential crisis; normality is finally restored when the older one does the smart thing and promptly falls off his chair.
12th-Feb-2007 04:22 am (UTC)
It's his opinion that he is getting neither enough attention or enough chocolate right at the moment, and he'd like to rectify that as soon as possible.
Yay! Pin! It is Pin! And it is so NOT terrible. That little part quoted above is LOVE and the rest was equally as sweet. Love the friendship! You did GREAT!!!!
12th-Feb-2007 05:28 am (UTC)
Ah, thankyou! ^-^
Jin's such an attention whore. XD Gotta love that about him. ♥
12th-Feb-2007 04:39 am (UTC)
This was good~ ♥
Jin leans on him with a smile, safe in the knowledge that he's somehow managed to diffuse a potential crisis; normality is finally restored when the older one does the smart thing and promptly falls off his chair.
Best ending ever! There's nothing like Bakanishi to break the tension. XD
12th-Feb-2007 05:29 am (UTC)
stuck for how to end it for
and then that just jumped out at me. XD A stroke of genius, perhaps!
17th-Feb-2007 05:28 am (UTC)
I really adore this drabble. I like Yamapi's deep thoughts, and how Jin doesn't really get it, but, albeit unintentionally, knows exactly the right thing to say. And the ending is perfect XD
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